tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6025492148467135972.post8870995696925901004..comments2011-07-28T03:43:07.960-07:00Comments on Heather's View: ScapegoatH. Mayerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18396446290062730768noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6025492148467135972.post-50981315326026483162011-07-28T03:43:07.960-07:002011-07-28T03:43:07.960-07:00A chilling comment on sibling relationships. But I...A chilling comment on sibling relationships. But I liked he storyChronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6025492148467135972.post-32823579742193124712011-07-27T11:37:27.805-07:002011-07-27T11:37:27.805-07:00I wasn't sure at first if the MC was male or f...I wasn't sure at first if the MC was male or female until about half way. Really, it could go either way :)<br /><br />Like the story, sorry the sister took the fall. Go to wonder how the sisterly bond will hold out after this!<br /><br />visiting from Indie InkCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6025492148467135972.post-44829845461980809622011-07-26T21:49:01.887-07:002011-07-26T21:49:01.887-07:00I like how your MC went from talking about the dea...I like how your MC went from talking about the dead man as "him" to "it," by the time he was being dumped in the trunk. Don't know if that was on purpose or not but it's pretty telling of the MC!Stilliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01845868140141738285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6025492148467135972.post-342389538087791772011-07-26T05:50:31.733-07:002011-07-26T05:50:31.733-07:00Great job! Not sure if I would be willing to keep ...Great job! Not sure if I would be willing to keep my mouth shut for my sister! (I don't have a sister but if I DID...) But it was second degree so maybe she won't have to be in jail too long. Loved the narrative and the voice of this.Alison Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14675871531099412006noreply@blogger.com